Comments : Two Hearts ...( Harrisham Rhyme)

  • 12 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Olwin good job with the forms challenge. You wrote a nice love poem of how a person feels for another.

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    You always find the simple words that create love and romance. Your poem reflects the beauty within and the love you so willingly give

    A well done challenge, and thanks for challenging me to aspire to new things ;-)

    hugs

  • 12 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    This was really a great poem. I agree with TJ your words are simple and yet so powerful. I am so glad I joined the club I would have missed out on some great poems
    Lovely :-)

  • 12 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    That is what love is all about, no matter the
    distance or the place love's heart beats as one. Well done with the challenge!!

  • 12 years ago

    by hannah kershaw

    This is so sweet x

  • 12 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    A Lovely Write, Excellent Work!!!