Comments : If you wonder what I am...

  • 12 years ago

    by Britt

    This has the same raw emotion as Nana's poem, that's instantly the same kind of strength and emotion I felt. You mastered this!

    "I must force myself
    to love all that I am,
    and accept all I am not."

    I love this. The best kind of inner peace is accepting yourself for who you are. This is beautifully written. I love, love, love it!

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Lol! Rania gave me this homework too, although I failed to do it, but you did it! you must feel proud! ;)

    This was very well-written Yakzz. Especially the books part! Lol I don't study as I should and that is making me feel sooooo unworthy :( you just nailed this one, I so relate to it. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Lol thoough i dont remember asking nano to write an " I am poem" but anyway you did do it perfectly :) this is amazing, and no grade would do you good, and I am glad that you explored your inner self :)

    yes you are

    I am like a brave
    white tiger that is not afraid
    to give her biggest roar
    to he who dares to mess
    with my heart..

    ^
    that, brave, and thats how you will always be, and thats enough for you to know what next do you wnt to do in your life, ANYTHING with bravery ;)

    amazing :) speechless...i will nominate this next week..no more votes!

    well done

    FIVE

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Ugh not an I am poem homework. It was like a list. :P