I Don't Promise

by Mike Storm Rage   Oct 1, 2011


*** if you are crying,
I don't promise I can make you stop crying,
But I can cry with you.

*** if you want to run,
I don"t promise I will stop you,
But I will run with you.

*** if you want to died,
I don't promise I can stop you,
But I can died with you.

*** if you want to hate me,
I don't promise I will stop you hating me,
But I let you continue to hate me.

*** if you want to kill me,
I don't promise I will prevent you doing it,
But I will let you kill me if that make you feel better.

After doing so much for you,
How you feel?
you feel nothing.

Day and night I cry seeing you so cold to me,
I don't blame you,
But if I want to blame
JUST BLAME MYSELF.
I should not fall in love with you from the beginning.

I just hope your future lover can love you more than me,
But that impossible,
Because in this world noone can love you more than me.
Although you are not mine,
But I will always love you in the darkside.

***= my lover name in this poem.

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  • 12 years ago

    by TheVampire

    I absolutely love the structure and the meaning behind it!
    there are just a few grammical errors to fix

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