Stars above

by Jill   Jun 23, 2004


I look up and i see the stars..
i look up and see where i want to be..
i want to be there in heaven with you
i want to be able to hold you again
i miss the way you smelled
i miss the way you smiled
all i want to hear from you is i love you
all i want to say is i love you back
just one last time
it was all most time for our i do's
then you got taken away, my love, my life, my one and only soul mate
i hate the way my heart aches
and when no one is looking all the tears that roll down my face, they never stop
i hate the way the pain never stops
but most of all i hate the way i cant stop loving you, that i cant be up there with you in the stars above

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  • 19 years ago

    by JS

    I liked this poem very much. You had a very good choice of words and it flowed nicely. One of few poems on this site that touched my heart directly. I loved the writing style used. Keep writing- you are very good! ~Jess

  • 19 years ago

    by Lexi Lou

    You got lotso talent! i loved how you exressed yourself! keep in touch! i wanna hear from you! you got a special charm in this poem!
    lexi lou

  • 19 years ago

    by Jill

    thanx everyone so mcuh for your comments they meant alot to me..

  • 19 years ago

    by Tiller

    Nice poem.i think its better than mine you probably been writing longrer than me

  • 19 years ago

    by Tiller

    Nice poem.i think its better than mine you probably been writing longrer than me

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