When I gave my heart I gave up freedom

Trapped in a snare of my own feelings

Scared it will stay this way for eternity

^^

Those three lines were very sincere and true. You defined love very right! I like this.However, I'd have some suggestions for you. I'd advise you to not write those first letters in capitals in every single new line.It will flow better.

I would suggest that you make it into stanzas so it will eye much more interesting.
Nevertheless, I enjoyed the read, very creative.

This is sincere and honest...emotions flow well in this poem..i can relate to this coz this is what is happening in my present relationship..great poem

I somehow really liked the title because though it has something simple it is interesting, but I think it tells a bit too much.
I have to agree with The Poetess because the way it is right now, visual wise, it might scare readers away. Besides the blank lines are somewhat confusing and they make every sentence stay on their own, but if you broke it into stanzas it might be more fluently and would feel connected.
The emotions are definately powerful and they fit to the context really well, I also liked the last three verses best.
Overall you did a good job and this poem has potential, with a bit of editing it'd be even better.

This is so honest and sincere..i love love love it.. i can relate so much! I love the way you portrayed love, its so true and full of emotion..Beautifully Done! I Appriciate Brilliant Work Like So(:
I Saw Your Post In Discussion, And That Its Closed, But It Would Be Awesome If You Could Find Time To Do A Couple Of Mine(: No Worries Tho.:D
Im Going To Check Out Some More Of Your Work!
I Loved This!!!!! 5/5
-Jessi

This is lovely and amazing though it is sad and as I read it I could feel the emotion just poring from it's pages each word packed with emotion,,,great job with ur poem just fantastic :) 5/5