Karan, sad. Sometimes we let memories of a past love make us sad and could make us miss a love at hand. (It is good to see you writing again)

Oh this is so sad. It really tugged at the heart. Memories are sometimes best forgotten. Brilliant Karan

Connie

Ah Karan it's so good to have you back bro.
Excellent write you never lost your touch

I love the word choice.
sad poem..
amazing write.
loved it.
emotions pouring out
5/5 :)

Beautiful and touching Karan... And Hillybilly BECKER is right :D ~ You haven't lost your touch, for penning the most exquisite of writes! :))

Loved it.

This one deserves a vote! :D

Memories are etched into our hearts and cannot be forgotten..at the same time while swallowed by that memoy we fail to see the other love waiting..touching write..take care.

It's so strange how we, on the one hand try to hold on to a love already gone and on the other hand hope to escape from the pain. What's keeping us prisoner is usually hope, once hope is gone, the shackles come off and you are free to move on. However unwilling you may be, in the long run you will feel better, Karan.

Very sad write, good imagery:)

5/5 Ingrid

A beautiful composition. Memories are more of a splintered part our essence, swirling us in a cycle of agony. One cannot really move on, but yes, in time get used to living a life without the presence of another. Having a broken heart is a good thing, it means we tried for something.

Beautiful and touching write... the lonneliness and the memories are so wonderfully painted by your words.

Your memories are lost among the stars,
I still feel your embrace in midsummer night,
I remember our first kiss under moonlight.
~ my most favorite part
But wow their it was again,,,fantastic and amazing I loved it,,,you are a great talented poet,,, magnificent and wonderful and very greatly done,,,awesome job :) :) 10/10

Sad poem, but very touching. :) Beautifully written.

Really a lovely and sad poem. well done

Bravo i love it sad poem memories hurt a lot bt its life good work

Again an emotional, imagery filled piece which is relatable.

Em