by RecycleBin Oct 9, 2011
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
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Can you feel my heart beat? |
by RecycleBin
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Dang..... Spammed myself. :o( |
by RecycleBin
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by RecycleBin
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Ha ... Well you're the reason I take constructive criticism. :o) |
by L
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Hmm.. I can sort of understand why this poem is with capital letters, since you are like pretty much screaming, but my advice is to keep it in lower case, otherwise, the capital letters will scare the readers away. |
by RecycleBin
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Ha ... Well you're the reason I take constructive criticism. :o) |