Winds Power

by E Dacaf   Oct 11, 2011


Gentle Autumn breeze, fly swiftly past me.
Bring forth cold breaths of new life.
Send peace into my burning lungs.
Let the old dead leaves into your current.
So they may cleanse this tired vessel I call me.
For when spring comes again I may form new growth.
And all will see the beauty I can be.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    Vivid images, gentle winds of enjoyment :-)
    Very good piece

  • 12 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    I liked this small gem :) Only suggestion I have is maybe a stronger title than "wind"
    hows about something more like "cleansing breeze or cleansing wind" you get my idea. Sometimes a spicer title can get more reads.
    Very nice!

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    I'm recommending you for good read in a new thread some of us has started in discussion. You have talent and I think you should be read..

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Great! I liked the way you incorporated nature.

    I'm debating whether it should be me or myself in this sentence..

    So they may cleanse this tired vessel I call me.

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