Rising from hell

by DiAbolIcaL LiThIuM   Oct 13, 2011


Rising from beneath the ground
i left this world of pain
theres no one to be around
and i no you feel the same
the fire burning hot inside
with my heart i must confide
to stay or go i must deside

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  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I think this piece is excellent. The fact it is so unique is nice. The word choice is so simple, yet somehow it works. I think the emotion is great. The flow is dead on. Amazing job. I hope this piece gets some more comments and/or rates.