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by Switchblade89   Oct 13, 2011


I love you, i wanna know everything there is to know. I wanna know things you dont even tell your closest friends. Ill be your lover, your friend, your everything til the end. Ill support you thru the bad ill be right there by your side for the best...ill beat all the rest. Ive learned from my mistakes i now know what it takes to make true love come true. I know you have no reason to believe me but i hope one day i can open your eyes to see there's noone better to be with you. Smile now, smile tomorrow, smile forever more, reach out your hand and accept what you never thought real before. You'll no longer fall, I'll be there for it all no more will they hurt you. All you have to do is decide if what i say is worth it and true.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    A nice piece of prose here. I could feel the intensity of wanting the girl to believe and trust you and more importantly the words written for her.

    I like the internal rhyme too and makes the piece a poem. Overall I like the optimism and hope woven throughout and it gifts this piece a light and promise to all that read it and see what is within.

    Take care,

    Michael

  • 11 years ago

    by miracle

    I love it! ita raw and honest and open...i love this so much! does she even know you feel this way?

  • 12 years ago

    by E Dacaf

    Very sweet and sappy poem. However please use the spellcheck next time.

    • 11 years ago

      by Switchblade89

      Why? The only thing misspelled was "noone" lol