I am never eating chocolate again!!
I LOVED THIS
So original, so well penned, the flow was awesome,
Amaaaazing.

Love,
Tara
xxxx

Haha.. Those repulsive calories.

I loved the end. <3

and a cup or two of hot chocolate and winter a perfect combination.

NANO,
this is worth: A FRONT-PAGE :)

Nomination is guaranteed.

I loved every verse of it.. You really had me craving chocolate now, but when I reached the end, I became awake for the fact that it has so much calories.. repulsive, indeed.

I love you,, and your writes :)

HAHAHAHHAHAHA THIS MADE MY DAY....
OMG...YOU CLEVER LITTLE VIXEN..HOW DO YOU EVEN...

AH...

P.S I know you're obsessed with your own breast..they are here again.. lmao

Maybe one day I'll write a poem about them.

A chocolate lovers poem for sure, one that can be easily understood and makes the reader run to the store, for you made if even more seductive then normally thought
My favorite lines. A wonderful tribute to something I love lol

Oh, how I like to
find you
in small golden cages
upon Grandma's
little closet

This poem was a mix of things at one point I felt the poem was about sentimental memories - "Oh, how I like to
find you
in small golden cages
upon Grandma's
little closet"

Then I felt it was about being sensual - "I'd taste you all day
long, daub you along
my breasts"

Then I thought it was about an eating disorder - "If only
you were off
these stubborn,
repulsive
calories."

This poem (and your last one) really showed you as diverse and deep writer. You know how to give a poem more than one meaning which makes the reader think and build a stronger connection to the poems

you never fail to keep my interest

5/5

Wow!

A poem that went straight to my heart... and thighs, and butt!!!

Seriously I loved the words you expressed, so vivid, so tempting!

Carlories or no calories Imma have my chocolate!

x