I Dream of a Valley.

by Eliza Gonzalez   Oct 20, 2011


I dream of a valley. It's called, Valley of Peace. My valley is beautiful and peaceful. In my dreams I go to my Valley, it's the only place I find peace. I always escape at night to this place. This place no one can hurt me or hate me. It's the most beautiful place I ever been to. The skies are always blue and the sun is always shinning bright. At night it's the best. Dark skies filled with illuminating stars. I love taking walks at midnight, especially with the man I love. Walking hand in hand. Oh, how I love him. He is my night sky. The most beautiful man, I've ever seen. He says sweet nothings into my ear and makes me smile. We take long walks on the dark paths that leads us to the river that runs for miles and miles, where we bathe each other in. My favorite part is laying in the tall grass holding each other, worrying about nothing. My life is complete when he is in my arms. He smiles so sweetly and looks at me with love in his eyes. I love spending time with him in the valley. Nothing to fear in the valley. No one here but the king of my life and I, valley for true lovers.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Eliza Gonzalez

    Thank you! I was thinking of writing it like that, but I summited my poem and I thought it was too late. lol.

  • 14 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Nice work.

    It's full of imagery and crisp in its delivery.
    I think it would benefit from breaking it into metrical lines. For example:

    I dream of a valley. It's called, Valley of Peace. My valley is beautiful and peaceful. In my dreams I go to my Valley, it's the only place I find peace.

    I dream of a valley.
    It's called, Valley of Peace.
    My valley is beautiful and peaceful.
    In my dreams I go to my Valley,
    it's the only place I find peace.

    Try it out.

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