Comments : Intruder (Haiku)

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Congratulations, my Myryn in that haiku contest! You always make me proud, I love youuuuu. : D

    Five!

  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Perfecylt haiku. .. I read it 3 times to make sure everything was perfect lol flawless peice xx

    tony x

  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Perfecylt haiku. .. I read it 3 times to make sure everything was perfect lol flawless peice xx

    tony x

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Myryn.
    Haikus are one of my favorite forms.

    And I like how you described the moon.. as an obnoxious person who wants to creep through your solitude.

    Amazing.

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    I think I've said this a million times but one more wont hurt. Haiku's are hard to do, in order to make them come to life the wording has to be just right. You penned this with a talented pen..Excellent

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    This a good poem. It was descriptive for a short piece and I loved your use of words. You really know how to put a poem together well.

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    I am starting to really appreciate Haiku poems and how so much can be expressed with so little words.

    This was a well written haiku. I got scared reading the poem at the thought of an intruder, made me want to close my curtains if I had any lol

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Acoustic Odyssey

    Beautiful Haiku. I love reading haiku's about the moon, the stranger in the sky. Much enjoyed :)