I'm happy you finally found happiness and comfort, Nana, believe me I am. I used to check your poems and see them in the sadness section, not all, most of them. And I'm glad that you have changed to a happy woman, although I love you in both cases. It would be so beautiful if we could have met in the last September, see why I hate fate, lol.

I could feel your passion while missing him, it's such a sweet thing. The atmosphere was rally uplifing and made me feel comfortable, thogh I'm not these days, lol, I loved the metaphors that aren't really metaphors, you never fancy your poems, you are direct. Still I found beauty and talent in this piece other than the emotions.

Very well-done, Ronie. :]

... 'rally' should be 'really'
'thogh' should be 'though'

Sorry, I hate writing on this stupid thing! Grrrr. It's such a torture.

'uplifing' should be 'uplifting'. Ughhhh. I apologize!

Missing you is like chasing naught in a cotton garden

^ don't tell me you were inspired by 'al zahra al bayda2' ??!!! If yes, then I'd be sad :'S

but also, I'd be happy because you wrote something.. Ill tell you about ;)

I run, run and run yet catch void,
while falling into arms of white clouds
or is it really..fog that I sink in?

^ Describing the whiteness as void is really expressive.. maybe a state of emptiness?

then comes white clouds.. total change in the atmosphere.. fuzziness :)

fog? -- then you question yourself... a twist also!! I like the variations. It kind of electrifies the poem.

Breezy, soft, but murky
carrying scarfs of your scent
and tiny drops of hope.

^ The first line has its empowering emphasis on your state..

Abstract like those nouns,
but real like dew.

^ Wait.. what nouns? you mean breezy , soft and murky? mmmm... interesting.. but why?

That's almost how it feels
when missing you...

^ Awww.. :)
I love the emphasis on how it feels to miss your love.

Great piece.. with so much smoothness and fuzziness.

I think I forgot something?

a nomination the next week and a high five:)

Abstract like those nouns,
but real like dew.

^ Wait.. what nouns? you mean breezy , soft and murky? mmmm... interesting.. but why?

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hahahe it is a play with words,

in grammar there are 2 types of words...

abstract and concrete ..

abstract is everything that can't be touched :

hope, love, energy, feelings..

while concrete :

wall, hand, "dew".. ;) ..blabla

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH now i got that!

I should study english literature when i finish medicine, hopefully if i get accepted medicine :S

lol

thanks for the info. It really helps!!:)

but ma jawabteeni... Zahra al Bayda2? u know that>?

LMAO are you insane, aked la2 ..lesh sho 5ason b ba3ed ? !

LMAO. Abed, you sometimes mention a Syrian poetess in my writing, shu ken esma, ya3amme shu 5as! LOL. Nana, honestly, I didn't understand the nouns part! x'/

you meant to say the abstract nouns? eh ana ma fhemta hik...meshe? blegh

NANA!! Innu 'cotton' --> Zahra Bayda2 :P lol 5alas forgettt!!:P haha

Nano, yes, Siham Al Sha'Sha' .. she writes just like you.. but in Arabic!

Cotton?? shasha? ...wait...what??

Heheheheheheh abed you're so adorable and funny!. nano ma te3tabe 3le haha ... lol guys

:$ :)