My Coldest Night

by LM   Nov 17, 2011


A very cold evening like your feelings to me.
No arms that will hug my freezing body.
Or a hand that will hold my hands.
All I left was a perforated blanket.

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  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    You penned a very sad emotion. A little edit of the language might make it a clearer piece. But I liked your theme and overall concept.

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    You penned a very sad emotion. A little edit of the language might make it a clearer piece. But I liked your theme and overall concept.

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