by Kenny Nov 23, 2011
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Since I left you can taste the pain and regret |
by Kenny
Yeah prciate it |
by E Dacaf
Now its flowing. Nice and fastpaced. keep it up and watch when you transfer poems. It can mess them up. Keep up the good work. |
by E Dacaf
I liked the words and the story was sad and hurt. But please please! re-edit it. The mes up after almost everyline destroys your work. |