Comments : I'm sorry :(

  • 12 years ago

    by kylexthexmagnificent

    Wow this is really good. Definitely felt the emotions of this while I was reading it. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Half Husband Half father

    So pure so sensitive poem it is really i loved it

  • 12 years ago

    by damon rusher

    Its deep and very good

  • 12 years ago

    by Roronoa Zoro

    Reminds me of my ex =( 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by lost angel

    Loved it!! all of it just perfect.

  • 12 years ago

    by damon rusher

    DEEP ON SOME REAL STUFF.. BUT IDK BOUT LOVE ANYMORE..

  • 12 years ago

    by ItDoesntMatter

    Nice one....

  • 12 years ago

    by Ruqayyah TG

    Wow, deep emotions I love it, I've never seen so perfectly rhyming poems, Your's is excellently amazing, talented loved...So far in my favorites !

  • 12 years ago

    by John Dlyan Boone BABY

    Love it great work 5

  • 12 years ago

    by Jay Kamwetu

    Its pure bliss darlin...pure bliss

  • 12 years ago

    by ArtistrySoul

    Really nice poem :), well written

  • 12 years ago

    by *NiCoLe*

    Very well written! I could feel so much emotion from this.

  • 12 years ago

    by VeinsofHate

    "I'm sorry for the heart I broke,
    that shattered with the words I spoke.
    I'm sorry for the empty space,
    that laid beside you in my place."

    most favorite part out of the whole poem, for me it really captures the mood and its so heartbreaking to read but such an amazing poem

  • 12 years ago

    by lost angel

    It was reallyyyyyyy good. i mean fantastic you dont need to change that at all. you are just great!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Very nice poem, well written , great job, keep it up and thanks ....... ur friend Tracy d

  • 12 years ago

    by Girl of Conviction

    Aww very well written girly :]]

  • 9 years ago

    by sera

    Em why is this so on point :(