This poem is excellent.
I loved the flow and structure of it and the rythm 5/5

U hav penned this down beautifuly..i was hooked to this from the beginning and the ending was wow..u r amazing. Thank u 4 taking my consideration.

Wow So Real And Full Of Power.
someday you will realize you really cant trust anybody.. i learned sooner than later, Haha.
It always turns out in the end, cus your the better person.
:)
5/5

Oh how much emotion was in this poem.

I felt saddened by it as this has got to be one of the worst things that can happen to you in a relationship

I felt angry reading it at your lover and your best friend. Forgive me for saying I wanted to slap them both.

I am sorry that you went through this. You wrote this so well I felt every word

x

I will appologize for the comment that I will write because I've been through this: DON'T let morons ruin your life, sure friends are fake as hell at times, but don't let it destroy your faith in friends. Life is full of s*** and we have to keep our heads up like that backstabber but don'to worry you will heal and love again 5/5

-Mori