Thank you, i wrote this poem for my brother and his girlfriend (my best friend)

It's a good one and I hope they get back and live happily. Perhaps if you would like more comments, I would advise you to be more active in the Discussion forum. All the best

Wow! superb lines~

i feel your presence
holding me together
the sweet sound of your voice drifting through my ears
soon we'll be together one day or the other
don't lose faith
ill get us back together
forever you say

Greatly penned! 5/5!

This was really cute.