Do it

Would u like to demonstrate

Do it please you when im hurt- this doesnt make sense mostly
do it please you when i cry- again
do u ever think that your
the reason why cant u see
i haven't smile in awhile
but since im here let me
tell you..you the only
reason of my tears
you the reason for
fears of loving
trusting!

well you have a knack for bad grammar and things of that nature. i dont wanna diss you just give helpful hints to improve so dont get me wrong. you should however learn proper stanza format. and grammar. then you can show off your writing talent