My Son, My Seed

by Razors Edge   Dec 9, 2011


Swaddled in safety
angels eyes
stare upwards.
Blue as a clear
morning sky.
I fall into
the abyss of
his innocence.
Heart breaking
from loss yet
a smile spreads.
He knows nothing
of my pain
My son, my seed
delight filled
bundle of energy.
Keeping you safe
is my quest.
Loving you is
my bliss

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  • 12 years ago

    by Jenni

    This is a really touching and captivating poem. I really like your choice of words because it's obvious that you picked them wisely. They don't only create a vivid image of your son looking up to you while you can't help, but to smile because of him, but also flow really smoothly.
    The feelings are really strong and they pulled me in even more. Overall this is a very well penned poem, which conveys a powerful message.