Comments : Heartbreak Crusade

  • 12 years ago

    by Bobby

    Venomous kisses left on lips,

    the poison of a relationship like a black widow spider eating her prey

    love the poem excellent work :0)

  • 12 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    This was actually one of my favorites you've ever written and one of the best I think you've ever written.

    I nominated it. :D <3
    5/5

    -Heather

  • 12 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    Relationships can be toxic but usually it is the fault of both parties though only no one will see that.
    Good write

  • 12 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Excellent job, you have poured your thoughts and feelings into this semidark poem, that many people would relate to.

    Applause for your thoughts and your wording.
    i enjoyed this from you, and really liked it.
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Adeele Muuli

    Great poem.Seems sad but true.Fav.

  • 12 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    Blood curdling words, from an anguished heart on a warpath against poor guys who are just looking for love. Losing trust can be difficult, losing love is devastating, but not irrepairable. A day will come when the heartbreak syndrome will be cured by a nicer guy, the venom from the lips will run dry, and the kisses will once again taste honey sweet to the right person.