Comments : Beauty Within

  • 10 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    I love how you used the hummingbird as the viewing of you & me.

    Showing how the bird just flies around living its life, enjoying the freedom. Watching as life happens around him.

    Great Job :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Meme

    There is something in this poem that gives you this warm, lovely feeling. The more times I read it, the more I love it.

    But my favorite lines were those:
    "In a world so affectionate yet rude
    comes and goes, cycling through
    life, death, and even you."
    This to me felt so personal and deep.

    Always a fan of your work, great piece Joe.

    5/5 and a nomination from me :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow this is great I loved it and interestingly done,,great description and awesome poem it was a delightful read and beautiful,,greatly done :) 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Rania

    This is very beautiful, I love it so much, I love your word choice and I love the way you organized your thoughts. the images you came up with and the flow ? ...breathtaking!

    CLAPS**a nominatioon too on tuesday

  • 10 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Oh my gosh, this piece is absolutely fantastic! I love the imagery and description, they really are amazing. I agree that the word choice is stunning, and it created a magnificent piece. Excellent job, 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    I love the symbolism of the hummingbird which you portray so well Joe, inside your poem- resurrection and rebirth. Everytime I see one- I am sure they are from the other side bringing us this message. I was face to face with one and it looked like a big moth with a beak, staring right at me and instantly I think of those who have passed. Loved it Joe. Take Care

  • 10 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    But in the end there it flies
    swarming about with nothing in mind.
    Vivid it's wings, bright gold and black
    enjoying a life so pure and free.

    this was my fav line, ur good at what u do Joe, the wording was wonderful, the imagery as well was superb. I enjoyed this piece.

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    This poem really speaks to reader and opens up their heart a little. It is an enjoyable piece that I could read over and over.



  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    Imagery here is beautiful. Your words are very melodious.