This reminds me of that one song..hmmm You cant always get what you want...
I liked the message here Dagmar. You need to capitalize those I's. Some people get pissy about too many I's in a poem so I really do try to eliminate as I can. Oh, and ALWAYS ALWAYS ALWAYS capitalize God :) Keep writing Dagmar!
Trusting on God, believing on God is a very nice thing. Anyone can put his/her problems in the hands of God, but I believe anyone should hard to get what he/she wants. God is there for the guidance. In life, every body doesn't get everything. Nice poem.
Now here, in your write I don't see any punctuation.