The way you write always never fail to captivate my thoughts
one heck of a poem, defnitly inspiring.

"For then, I laughed with them too
though it was not really funny."

^ So many times in life we tend to make a joke of subjects that cause us difficulties and sometimes its for the better and other times well its just a completely negative thing to do. I think each reader will view this poem differently but one things for sure you haven't failed to pull the reader in and get them thinking about this poem.

Excellent

5/5

The first stanza in this poem is awesome!

To say that you stirred your thoughts into the darkness of of the black coffee - makes me think that your thoughts were in fact dark thoughts itself - the use to say that it was already bitter.

Still there was something
missing, and hence I
coughed my feelings
with bits of my heart that
didn't wish to stay caged
inside this semi-cold body.
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Saying things that need to come out. That you don't want to keep bottled up inside - The use of the words semi cold body - makes me think of a cold heart - closed off

after all, even robots
do need to breathe-
deeply.
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Here I think you're calling yourself a Robot? Emotionless and lifeless? It's like a robot that takes orders and repeats everything. Brings me to the semi - cold words you expressed. I couldn't imagine a robot being warm

Well written hun

x

Tjis is a seriously well written poem that stirs the soul

Sign into your old msn account woman, I dont have your new one. sign into the iwud one

Lmaoo hahahahahahaah okaay loolll

Well, What can I say without repeating myself,
because seriously I am in awe and speechless in what to say, becuase the only fault I can find is that you made every emotion I could ever feel come to the surface and I look a right mess right now!! lol

The flow was amazing, the wording and everything just fit together and the meaning I grasped was that you only laugh at yourself because the opposite would be too hard to express, and others make fun of you, but you feel cold and shut off from there snipes.

Awesome piece girl
mwah
hugs

love
Tara
xxxx