Lady in red, you're so damn smart..
I love you.

Hahaha thank you 3aboudie, lol you know..drama+ lady in red..good mix ;p

OMG !! This is so freakin amazing, lol

Short, but captivating @_@

You ROCK lady in red, or in your case, lady in yellow :P

Hahahaha lol

From now on, you aught to pay attention to

^ Captivating start. It sounds so bold, and that you have many things to say!!

a very important scene in our funny drama

^ Drama! wow, it's my carpe diem. This year, we'll be making A thousand And One Nights (with a twist) in school. I'm gonna try-out on wednesday for some characters!

while you play the ignorant man, who wears stupid pride

^ more drama, and phoniness. I love where you're going.

behind his pencil marked smile,

^ That image is enticing. Again, more acting.. less reality.

I, won't be the lady in red

^ Lady in Red.. ahhh.. that's amazing. It is fiery!

waiting at the window with her nerves on fire-

^ My god, that's my best line. As if the redness in the dress reflects her inner state!

not anymore, at least.

^ So strong.

I honestly will be the ignorant woMan,

^ I love the play on woMan.. You're gonna take his roles now. Superb!

who doesn't care anymore,
if you care or not.

^ I thought this was the end. I told myself, well, GREAT!

However, keep smiling!

^ BUT here... my god.. what a way to end. Telling him, keep acting.. as if it would matter anymore.

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE THIS PIECE!

It better wins the next week<3

A short but good piece. I felt this poem really pull me in and I loved the way you set the scene out ready for the reader to jump right in.

5/5

This is a rub it in your face kind of poem which I love!

The use of the words "Pencil Marked Smile" - something that is not perminant and can be changed at any time. I like this analogy very much

A short but very direct poem! There is a lot of emotions depicted here. It's like a little story - telling the readers how it used to be - what you were like (the lady in red waiting with nerves on fire) Saying you won't be this anymore depicts the change in the story and the way this person feels about the other now.

I love the last line - amazing and well fitted for an ending!!!

x

You always pen poems with style.
Originality and strength,
Awesome

Lady in Red (SCARLET WOMAN)

Fabulous piece

mwah
xxxx

Okay, Uhmm this piece is .. Bemusing to me.
I started reading and I enjoyed the flow, the words, and the tone, then I was lost. I re read it again and the same. So I guess I'm not ready for this piece.
I have no idea what this is about. So this is one of the pieces where I have to comeback and read another day.

Yeah I can definitely feel thee emotion and it's a really good poem I enjoyed reading it :)

Such a massive burst of emotions in a very short poem.

I'm deeply impressed.
superb.
nominated

It would be hard to see how the passion of this poem would not bring a smile in spite of any despair reflected.