Comments : I became

  • 12 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    I loved this Yaki :) Esp. this part:

    in the minutes of insanity when
    the night felt like day,
    and the day felt like night
    and I could not find reasons,
    nor peace
    inside my pupils,
    when my eyes were filled
    with empty tears that fell out of blue..

    I became a poet
    in my solitude,
    where I bloomed,
    where I wept,
    where I lived

    I dont know if I have noms left..I'll try. Very well done Poet! Take Care lOSTLOVE

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Most of this was simply amazing, however, that ending was epic, It may have been a simple piece but it held true meaning, many (especially me) can probably relate to this,
    Life is not easy, but writing gives it a base, a way of making sense of the tough times,
    a really great piece Yaki.

    xxx ((hugs))

  • 12 years ago

    by The Queen

    Another deep and inspirational poem from you, dear! Muah!

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    I read this and i feel proud that i am a poet. you have written a beautiful poem that i think could be seen as an anthem for P&Q poets.