Awesome piece Liz. I wish I had my Exbury Garden too.

Wow amazing beautiful I loved it and greatly written everythings fabulous and fantastically worded,,you capture my eye each time I come to read your delights :D 5/5

Great poem:) from a great poet
5/5 from me

It's imagery was pure gold, perfection in each stanza,
Loving the sweetness and romantic tone, while setting the serene scene.

I loved the opening, and the ending was so tender in it's wording.
The flow was smooth and gentle, what a lovely piece.

Love,
Tara
xx

Vibrant words would flow -
from my thoughts
Making their way
down to my soft lips

Tracing its curves'

Brilliant write, very sensual lines expertly placed for optimum affect. Awesome

This beautiful. I love your use of words (simple yet moving) I also liked your imagery and how you managed to write a love poem without it sounding cheesey. This is a good write.

5/5

Oh My Liz... this is so fervent, the emotions, the style.. I can see and feel that it's burning. I love the sensual touch, and the dreamy tone. some metaphors awakened my senses.... At places, also, it was melodious, and the whole idea of the Exbury Garden is flawlessly penned!! :)

What a breathtaking piece... beautiful~

This poem is so beautiful, and it was like a breath of fresh air. I love the first stanza, it was so sweet, and I like how you referred to this person as your muse.

Your metaphors and imagery blew me away. It was such a joy to read! I love the vibrant words flowing from your thoughts, the mezmerizing sounds sweetly rolling off your tongue... Amazing!

And I love how at the end, you two will be lead to your own garden. It was such a sweet and romantic poem.

Great job! :)

The poem is beautiful and does not need an elaborate interpretation. So I'll just pitch in my thoughts on this beauty.

Vibrant words would flow -
from my thoughts
Making their way
down to my soft lips

Tracing its curves

^ Like TJ said. This specific part is sensual.

Like succulent melon juice -
tantalizing
Awakening my taste buds

^ "Awakening my taste buds" - I find it extremely creative. It is all you.

We would dance under the moon -
while it hovered over still water
catching glimpses of its own
silver reflection

^ Love this part. Moon trying to catch its own glimpse in the still water is amazing. Its like the water has become a mirror and the moon is trying to view its own beauty from it, going around and about the lovers, hovering to catch its own glimpse. This particular part makes the poem exquisite.

The stars would burn
across the night sky
lighting the path beneath our feet -
leading us to our very own

^ I can almost picture a couple upon a dark floor with twinkling stars beneath the face of the floor that guide the lovers to an exbury garden into a different dimension, much like a romantic fantasy.

Very well written.

You never cease to impress me. This Another amazing piece. Great job, I mean amazing job.

This one is my favorite part :

Like succulent melon juice -
tantalizing
Awakening my taste buds

This is a lovely piece. I love your title. The imagery is beautiful, as is your word choice. Great work! :-)

Just poem has beautiful imagery and free flow that would be impossible for me to reach alone