This is a sweet and emotional poem. I do recommend you correct some of the grammatical errors, so then the poem will be perfect :)

Great job!

Awwwwww cute if only my bf was dis romantic!

Loved this.. ha, super cute (:
4/5

This is so sweet it blew me away, I love it, she must be so lucky to have you and your great poetry :), you're heart was really expressed here, wonderful poem :)

There are some errors within this piece, mostly just needing more punctuation. There is one line that sounded awkward in the second stanza, last line:

"but now I see you all need"

Maybe review that?

As I read through this, I felt it almost had a lyrical aspect to it, maybe in the rap genre. Seems as though it could be considered "slam poetry" as well.

This poem seems to be about you realizing your true feelings for this girl. She has been in front of you for a long time as friends but now you see that you truly love her.

Overall, nice job but it does have potential to be better. I hope you don't take my critique offensive, just trying to help! :)