Aww this one is cute. The way its written makes it even better I think.
Love is a nice thing. ^^

Its A Feeling That Can Never Be Forgotten !!

Very cute<3

Considering it was your first, you did really well. Its sweet and loved how you describe your angel who you are unseen to. Great work

Not bad, it was good.

<3 cute. nice job :)

It's really a common disaster to be overwhelmed in fantasies unrecognized.. Good job gem..