Aww... Meme this was an interesting poem..
I love how you began it, with things and memories that you'll leave for this person when you're gone... I like how you described your scent from the last hug for example, and your echo from every song... I really liked your descriptions, they were refreshing to read.

The ending was unexpected, but I liked it. I like the idea of wanting someone to remember you until you've already gone... it makes it more special.

Great job hon!

This was beyond powerful
the interest you've gave us through out reading the whole thing was very captivating
i read to the last word with full interest
nominated, no bet

Beautiful.

I really am enjoying your poems here hun.

I loved this - there was something so sad but romantic about this poem. The words and meaning very poetic

The poem reminds me of signs. When someone passes away and they want to tell their loved ones they are around - they give them signs. It's like telling them to remember them when they're gone but to look for things in their past so they can never let them go. The part where you mention the echo with the singing and the photos may have something new in them.

I was very touched reading this poem and loved it.

x

This is so amazingly written.. the metaphors, the flow, the whole atmosphere:)
Fantabulous, Meme

Very well written. I especially like the first line, it is impressive. Keep on writing!

Start looking for me through
the minutes of our yesterdays

this will be stuck in my mind for a while, great write, i loved it.

I like it great pice
Read in between the lines
of all the letters I left you behind
Look closely at our old pictures
there maybe something new to find
Listen to the songs of hummingbirds
they will draw a picture on your mind

The rhyme was so not forced that I did not find myself conciously struggling for a beat which came so naturally flowing
, and romatic imagery that left me feeling sorry for the fool that let you go