Comments : Hunger Pains

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    It is such a precious piece.Loved it!

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    How brilliant is this!
    I loved the images and the feelings I got from this poem.

    I loved how the first stanza told us how you felt and then the second stanza told us why you felt that way. The way you miss them and their words - how it feeds you

    Awesome!

    I loved this poem completely

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    Your wording is brilliant. The poems choice of words and flow is amazing. Well done

  • 12 years ago

    by Ronel McCarthy

    Awesome !