Such a remorseful poem. so sad. the emotions in it where true and heartfelt. i can only suggest or tell you that when you put a comma, the word that comes next doesnt have to start with a capital letter. He will be fine, just have the faith in God and believe.

Really good, i love the way you made the words fall together and just an overall good story to it good grammar well done i will give you a 5 voting :)

This poem brought tears to my eyes. You did a good job with this poem.