My pain in the world

Wow this is frightingly lovely
Just look up and he will listen

Such sadness flows out of this poem, word by word. Wanting somebody to pay attention before you take yourself out of this world. Not sure of how you went so far with that cut.

I can see you looking down at your wrist wondering how did it happen that bad.

Beautiful job
5/5

We all can relate. you can check my poem out if you don't believe me. Very nice poem btw. and don't take this the wrong way but ur friends and now, me, your new online friend r here to help you if u need any. I am not a stalker or anything. Just a person who felt what you are feeling in that poem

I rate (Excellent), I enjoy the rhyming !

Your rhyme was well done, not forced but with a nice flow. The third stanza was a little shaky compared to the rest but overall the poem was very good