Love gone; Lost sun

by djastherite   Jan 22, 2012


Oh love now that you're gone,
I'm so lifeless, there seem to have no sun.
How can I ever start my day right?
Without you, my energy-giving-light.

I remember the days when we had quality times together,
There were no photos but they will be in my heart forever.
These memories I will forever cherish,
I don't care, come on tell me I'm childish.

Now everything is dark and alone I stand,
Was there a supernova, where is my sun?
Oh, you might be somebody else's star now,
I wish you the best, I hope there's no more broken vow.

So goodbye my love, goodbye my sun,
Always be happy, have a lot of fun.
Goodbye my sun, goodbye My Only One.

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  • 7 years ago

    by kuchicki byakuya

    Its so sad... great writing.

  • 13 years ago

    by shellfish

    I like this poem but i found it very heavy and almost dry. but i love the last stanza and think the rhyming is good.

    • 7 years ago

      by kuchicki byakuya

      yah, it must've lacked creativity but its wonderful altogether.

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