Those we love always have our best parts although we are unable to see the pearls we carry inside.When someone feeds our insecurities and leads us to despair, we have to reflect on the level of his love for nobody deserves our tears.
I read somewhere that insecurities are necessary because those who don't feel them are dangerous people. They don't care about risky situations.Besides I do think it is almost impossible to live without being insecure some time no matter how self-confident we might be.

Wow this saddens me and makes me want to cry it really touched my heart and greatly worded and an excellent write 5/5

I liked how you put your feelings into short yet very touching sentences, they sting deeply
and the last part:
"you would then think -
that you got the better of me

a part which I don't believe
exists at all"
it summed up all the pain

well done : )
5/5

Alright Liz :)

At first, your tone sounded so vulnerable and you were quite pictured to me as a lady who could easily succumb to the wind and fall instantly with a delusional poke. I like the buildup to the surprising end, every thought revolving awesomely around the feelings of how he made you and how he was able to get the best of you...

but, shockingly at the end, oh I love that, the best of you wasn't the best at all... he got some useless stuff that do not make your steadiness shake at all.

Amazingly written and quite an original thought.

Oh My, What a strong ending poem, such vulnerability and weakness at the beginning, and I can see your hurt and pain so vividly and then the ending was just so inspirational, and so "I'm fine without you", that I just love it

Great piece here Liz

Love
Tara

This poem made me think that its all right to know our insecurities because if we know them then we can work our way into making them strong and pretty much get rid of them but of course it takes time but everything is possible.

I like everything in this piece. Specially how the reader can picture and feel the author's emotions as well as learning something from it.

Amazing job.

Very sad and yet I got a touch of determination to not reveal what this person has done to you.
excellent wording, laced in emotional value.

Wow this poem is so emotional and deep... I can see how this affects you, and I can relate. I believe words can stab a person and hurt them more than physical pain.. and you've penned this concept clearly in this poem.

"To you -
I'm a meaningless whisper
caught in the wind -
that seems to mock
my existence"

>> flawless... and so powerful!

Great job with this poem :)

Another emotion laden verse, presented with humility here:

To you -
I'm a meaningless whisper
caught in the wind -
that seems to mock
my existence

So I will make believe
that what you said
in the end
was not what I heed

Almost saying I will bear your insults, regardless. Being broadminded certainly helps to avoid a conflict, and often win in adverse situations. I think the insecurities within certain people makes them attack other people, with the least of provocation. Seems like it is about a mother-in-law?

I love it. I can feel your pain