Beneath the shadow of your wings

Hi jenni

great comments, I learn by each comment

I will try to put in some ,, .. ;; and :)
best regards
Ole

I think that the title is absolutely great and eye-catching!
I also liked reading this poem, I'd just recommend you to add some punctuation because that'd make reading even more pleasureable and easier for the reader. :)

Hi

Thanks for the kind words, I hope emotions is all peoples area, as you state

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Ole

Hi expressions of emotions is your area

Hi thanks for your kind comments
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ole