Ray, something we want to be sure to say to our true love is to please never forget. You have taken the things you remember and given us your feelings about each. I found myself humming and singing the words the more I read.

This was a very touching piece. So many emotions all wrapped in one poem. Very nice. -Nik

Could feel true love from every single word. Great write, full of emotions. To me it was more like a beautiful love song...loved it.

all the best and take care

"Keep something precious
In a time capsule
So here I am
Thinking of you again
Where did the years go?"

- Loved these lines, I can really relate.

A beautiful poem! I'm so glad you wrote another one. I liked the repetition in certain lines, it really emphasized the emotion in the poem. 5/5 my friend!

mandy :)

As I read each of your love poem I sense that due to your long absence because of the war, these suppressed feelings were not able to flow and therefore not able to let the woman in your life know the depth of your love..I maybe wrong but that is what I get. It is like all the bundled up emotions are let out..take care and keep penning.

Out of love, much ego is shed. Nothing has come to stay, but truth.

Great writer.. I'm so amazed...

Epic,I could swear this poem actually physically made my heart ache. Great job, 5/5. :)