Comments : Unoriginal - Tanka

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    If you have no talent; then no one ever does!

    You are the Godfather of talent, and we are lucky that you have passed us some of it :)

    <3

  • 12 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Eye Catchy Larry!, You are one of the most original human beings, that was such a great deep closing line...so true! recording what you see, feel..hhmm

    I guess, we all are :), this must be one of those poems reflecting your wisdom, humor, and talent. All together.

    Thank you for being you

    edit: what I was trying to say is, analyzing the simplicity of the word choice, it's as tho Godd created everything we write about, and we write that our own way. Hence, unoriginal.

    I keep having more thoughts, thought provoking piece!

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    I agree with what's said above. You are originality, itself!! :)

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    And how you see it is original :-)

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    It is very original indeed. Loved it.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Awesome poem!!! So much is said in 5 lines.
    I assume this is just the way you are feeling but to be honest......................
    PFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFT
    A load of bull lol

    Kidding...

    well sort of lol

    Every poem that I have seen from you and everyone on here is absolutely original. Even if you record what you see - you are showing us what you see through YOUR EYES and no one else's thus the poetry is original. Everyone has some form of talent when it comes to poetry. There are people that have talent when it comes to rhyming or another person may have talent when it comes to formed poetry. Each person's style is unique and that is what makes them original.
    You are an exceptional writer and don't let anyone else tell you otherwise :| even yourself lol

  • 12 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Hehee either they are reading it wrong or i am..or none is..but i got addicted to this piece...leaves an impact,for me i surely still insist that you werent targeting yourself rather than implying how everything we create throu words...is already there but in a diff form...okay i tried not to babble but came again and couldnt help it!

    Wise wise wsie poet! Honest human being..God thinks your being grateful too XD