Comments : Not What You Think

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Hahahaha... It's not what I was thinking..

    Seriously not, but habanero isnt that hot.. To make you cry.. I think.. Or I got to try it.

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Oh WOW.... I love this entire piece...You had me teary as well... reading this I felt sorrow and pain....and then at the end I felt like an explosive went off....ha ha. well done!!!

    I have eaten habanero's before.... ugh..HOT

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    There you fooled me a lot, well done

    laughing a lot here

  • 12 years ago

    by yogi73

    Hahah!! very clever!

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Im surrounded with biology books now and im bored, so i decided to log in sea the club a little and got curious when i read ur title.
    Thanks for making my night Liz lol
    hahhahahahahahahahaahhahh

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Hahaha,
    Liz, I didn't expect that, it was comical and well timed and just made me smile which I grateful for.
    It was definately not what I expected, and I loved the suspense until the end, It was well thought out and flowed well

    love
    xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    Hahah..wonderful..i am lost for words..i mean, i thought you had a cold, then i see that you were given the wrong food but even better to this tragic thing, you add some humour. Dontget me wrong, i feel sorry what happened but i couldnt help to laugh at how beautifully this ordeal was written.

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Haha yeah it's hot but great and awesome I eat that everyday and it helps build my immune system cuz of the vitamis it holds but I'm kinda used to it's hotness now,,,great poem I enjoyed it very much :)

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    I was getting choked up for a minute LOL that was a gotcha..Loved it
    Nice flow and touching to a certain point then laced with humor :-)

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    Liz, Liz, Liz

    You never fail to surprise me too with your pieces.Loooooooved it!

  • 12 years ago

    by RSJ

    LOOOOOl
    this was surprising to say @ the least,
    You've totally given me a different impression but The chili sauce note has officaly made my day

    this could be the funniest poem i've read in a while
    5/5 liz, never the less= -)

  • 12 years ago

    by Bridges

    Lmao!!!! Oh my GOSH! That served an epic twist! I was seriously like - OH NOOOO!!! D: and then by the end I was like - o.o ??!?! Hahaha Good one! And YEAH, damn it, that waitress!! ;D

    and heyyyy. I should've known from the friggin' title!

  • 12 years ago

    by Timothy

    Brilliant attention to detail, ah, such inspiration.

  • 12 years ago

    by kiki

    Lol! it was pretty good!

  • 12 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Hahaha i loved the twist :D
    never expected it to end like that :D
    enjoyed reading :D awesome write :D