Faithful

by Gravity   Feb 2, 2012


Me
They laugh
at me falling
but I get back up, strong
but hopeless,faithful, but hopless
I walk away to be stabbed in the back
They watch me bleeding, and yet they
Laugh, my hands stained with blood
And i get up
Once agian

Strong,
Hopeless
But very faithful
They laugh at the blood, red
I'm on my knees, a pool of blood
At my feet, I grab the knife and throw it
At their feet, then i get up again
They fall silent, staring
Then i grow wings
And fly
Free

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  • 12 years ago

    by Bridges

    I really like the repetion you used in this poem. It's like, even though you seemed hopeless to so many, you kept your faith and in the end that's what got you through the hardships. I really like this. It's inspiring. The way you ended it, made me smile a little. I couldn't help it. Good for you!! :) Keep strong and keep writing!