Comments : To my family.

  • 12 years ago

    by bobbiejo

    I love it

  • 12 years ago

    by UndeadGrace

    Stay true to your self
    Great poem

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This piece shows how determined you are to help and shows how large of a heart you have. ecellent piece

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Yup, All the best!

    I love your determination. Anything that you want to achieve, you can as long as you give your best.

  • 12 years ago

    by Tomiladeo Seun

    Go for it girl.

  • 12 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    Your words genuinely move me. Your determination and innovative thinking will do a lot, young lady, in these difficult times. All the best. Nominated for the substance and courage in writing this piece.

    EDITED: Unable to nominate as it is >2 weeks old. I am so sorry.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lifeless Doll

    Very lovely :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Rachit Bhanage

    Good work dear,I really appreciate ur wisdom ! You'll make your mum dad proud !
    Keep up !

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    Well written and just so really opens me up to the situation of this world. Its nice that you know what you want to achieve in life and with determination like that you have shown in this poem, you will surely make it not only for you but your family as well.

  • 11 years ago

    by Jhierren Paz

    You can if you're determined to achieve what you wanted to achieve in life. ;)