Ray, this is filled with such emotion, things that we wish to convey to the one we love and sometimes think we are afraid to do so. This has such a romantic touch to it. Well done.

When we find that one person who heals us mentally as well as emotionally making us whole, been separated from that person even for a day makes us feel miserable. It is a kind of love that heals everything just lying in their arms..I find this a touching write..take care.

I am taken away by this; I may possibly put this on my facebook and of course give you credit. I would just like to dedicate it to someone if you dont mind.

This is one beautifully written romantic piece. Great flow and and an powerful image to take reader to a beautiful place with someone special. Loved it.

all the best and take care

Some really good lines in this poem- although it was all fantastic.

"These jet-black thunderclouds,
rolling above while I drown"

- Such lovely imagery here, vivid, sad, and beautiful. Good word choice.

"Because you change my life
See what you meant in my eyes"

- One of my favorite lines.

I feel that your poetry always manages to really make me think or feel something powerful in some way or another. 5/5

mandy :)

Thank you, Mandy!

Your poems are amazing...you write from your experience and what you truly feel. Hope to see more of your works.

Have a superb day!

Ray :)