It took me a while to read it but i finally finished :) this is a really really really good poem!! it pulled me in in every sentence, it is a really heartfelt poem.. it is real deep as well. it expresses a ton of emotion.. well written 5/5

Wow you really added alot of GREAT detail into this one :]]

lots of emotion expressed :]

i love it girly :]

5/5 great job

I love you poems! They capture and delight me at ever word. You have a real talent not many can find keep up the good work!

Amazing!so a long long poem..but quiet pretty..love this poem..keep up the good work=)5/5

I'm in total awe of this poem. Brilliant, awesome to describe it doesn't even come close.
Just a great, great poem..
Wish I could write like that.

Very, very detailed with feelings!!
:) I am sure many can relate to this piece!

Well, done! (:

Very detailed...lots of emotion. great job :)

I love the link between a paper cut and a broken heart.
This piece is very expressing and emotional.

Just a few spelling mistakes here and there.. Probably typos, nothing major.

A beautifully sad piece. Well written.

5/5

I love the link between a paper cut and a broken heart.
This piece is very expressing and emotional.

Just a few spelling mistakes here and there.. Probably typos, nothing major.

A beautifully sad piece. Well written.

5/5

AaaaAwwwww...this poem left me with aaaaAwwwww! Loaded with emotions... infact over-loaded?!?lol very well written!
5/5

This is really good:)
My favorite parts where:
"My finger feels like my heart
Skin broken and flush tore apart"
and
"I miss everything we had
Why does good always have to turn to bad
Life grows lucky to sad"
I Think it's really clever how you used a paper cut,as a way of describing your feelings:)

This is so good, but sad

Really a sad n emotional piece... So creatively expressed!
well done!!

This is another great poem..

GOD should make some medicine for us so that we may forget all our miseries, pain and bitter memories. I can't console you. May God always shower His Bessings on you and give you strength to overcome this huge pain!

This poem has some incredibly vivid metaphors. What a great exploration of the grief of unrequited love! Wonderful! The repetition added so much too.