Suspense.. I was like oh dear.. please don't let it be what I'm thinking about..
and at the end my eyes were like this O_O.. yes!! its not what I thought it was.
eight legs, I can only think about spiders or insects.

Amazing job, you took me to imagining a whole lot of things and at the very end I was like haha.. silly me. Well done, seriously amazing.

Wow I like this a lot!! I really like how you wrote this poem... the suspense was great... the surprising ending was clever!! I really liked how you didn't say what it was, but gave the reader a clue that made us figure it out!

I really thought it could be some kind of domestic abuse, and trying to get rid of a bad man in your life!!! But wow great poem... and different :)

Great job hon!

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I LOVE this piece.... Liz- you have a creative talent... you dazzled me... at first my heart was breaking at the thought of someone making you feel so uncomfortable....and then at the end...you made me giggle.... oh this piece is brilliant!!

Liz, this piece is a pearl.Loved it.

HAhahahahah oh my God, Liz :P
A Spider?

I'm not afraid of a spider, rather when a spider disappears :P
I love how you got the reader to feel that it's about someone you hate.... but in the end, each time you have a twist :P

And for the second read, each stanza assures me that hahaha.. spiders :P

"You can tell by
the way I move
when I see you,
that my feelings are
not one of
adoration."

^ You hate it!

You know how much
I hate surprises.

^ LOL,,,, haha I love it!

I would love for you
to leave this house
and completely out
of my life without
me hurting you.

^ Liz, you are one heck of a creative poetess!!!!
---- This is a superb poem :)

Omg hhhhhh, I love this poem, its amazing:)

Liz, This is fantastic...
so creative and just amazing,

Though I am annoyed that Abed commented on this because his comment came up on my account news so I already knew this was about spiders before I read it!!

However, it was very well written and thought out.

Love it Liz

xxxxx

Let me knw wat eight legs r needed fr..great art..

What a twist and perplexing poem. Very creative of you. Couldn't fathom what 8 legged mammal, reptile, amphibian or insect this is. At last from them comments, its a spider, WOW! like a riddle, :). Magnificently wonderful..

This poem was very clever :D I read it and thought it was about a person then I got to the end and thought it was about a spider. I hate spiders. I think this poem was put together very well and I liked how you supprised us all with the ending. You really thought this poem through.

Excellent

5/5

Sweet and pleasant read..........reminds me of my daughters dislike for spiders ! I think this poem conveys her attitude towards our 8-legged friends ..........rather 8 legs instead of 8 heads !

Wow amazing creative wonderful I loved it :) 5/5

Something about this poem just gave me chills. I dont know why but The words or maybe the way you described the whole thing just felt like a deja vu; its weird I know, but I think I lived that moment once before.

Love it Liz, love it more than you can think of.
Tnis will definitely go straight to my fav list, I need to read it again and again and again.

A nomination for sure.

--Meme

I Feel like your poetry is so similar to mine..
Omg..Its like reading my own stuff in my opinion anyways..

I'm not saying you're copying me, Don't get me wrong..

but to me it seems like we think very alike :)

I actually like it a lot..

this was stunning.