Goodbye to "Love"

by Miss Lonely Teacher   Feb 10, 2012


Before I start my poem I'd just like to say:
I'm sorry if at times I start to ramble
and I lose the rhymes I wanted to write to you.
you see, I've had enough of it all
never giving into this spiraling fall again.
I've jumped before without so much as a 'chute
and went free-falling into nothing.
but I've come to the end of my patience
and you'll know this in time when your heart refuses to mend.
I should be nice about this though...
it's not solely your fault
you were just the final straw that brought my caring to a grinding halt;
you were the straw that broke this camels back
and you were the the moon making this eclipse so black.
walking away without a word to you will bring me little pleasure
only because you took away any part of me that could ever treasure
revenge.
so farewell and goodbye
I hope we never meet again.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Miss Lonely Teacher

    The line "i've jumped before without so much as a 'chute and went free-falling into nothing" refers to 'falling in love'. i suppose i did make it a bit vacant lol. it's like when you jump from a plane, you have the parachute. it's a safety measure. in this, i jumped without that safety measure and after the fall i hit ground.

    lol hope that makes sense ^_^

  • 12 years ago

    by Xionide

    "I've jumped before without so much as a 'chute
    and went free-falling into nothing."

    that line is great, not sure what it is about it, but it stands out for the better.

    all in all, this was a good release of emotion brought forth into poetry. I like it.

  • 12 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    You were just the final straw that brought my caring to a grinding halt;

    I like those lines, and I like this poem, it's like waking up finally. . . . realizing it was time to move on and that you're better than the pain ... its hard but u really cant say anything other than goodbye... nice poem :)

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