A swing in the sky

by Muran   Feb 18, 2012


Stars told me they made,
A swing for us in the sky,
They made it with our dreams,
Every layer sewn with our love,
They are watching us every night,
And they were stealing our dreams and love,
To make a swing for us,
For us to swing in the night,
Together in the sky,
Holding each other,
As high as we want,
As long as we want,
Until we get tired,
And fell into each other's hands.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Mermaid Woman

    I enjoyed this poem very much... so hopeful and lovely.

    I have only one critique. I would change the following line from;
    "Every layer are sewed with our love"
    to
    Every layer sewn with our love. Or all layers sewed with our love.

    This allows the flow to continue unarrested.
    Happy writing!!!