This blood on my lips

by Mr Rhee   Feb 20, 2012


Oh, my God.

Oh, my God.

Oh, my God!

What have I done?
What's happened?
What did I do?

All this blood on my hands...
All this blood on my lips.

It doesn't taste like mine own....!

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  • 12 years ago

    by Jump from Life

    This is very intriguing... I love it!
    Amazing suspense, and I hope you could write something about maybe whos blood it is? Its sort of an amazing cliffhanger if it was in a story! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    Yes I too do agree with others above...!!
    It does seem quite mysterious....!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I agree with the girls above me... ewwww

    that being said, I do love the darkness... It almost feels to me as if it's a vampire-ish type poem.... almost like you have been turned into a vampire and just realizing it.... really a twisted piece... awesome!!

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Uhmm.. its strange, It makes me wonder how does anyone knows if it taste like their own or not? Who knows, and I actually don't want to know. Eerie indeed.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ending Credits

    O.o

    -takes a careful step back-

    lol
    Dark and Eerie. Maybe it's best that it STAYS a mystery, huh O.o