This is a very good poem! It had a unique and interesting rhythm.
I liked it very much

I just read this poem again, and noticed a couple things that need fixed... "began" should be "begin, and "quiet" should be "quite" Other than that, it's a great poem!

Oh my gosh! Awesome poem. That was really great. I especially loved the ending. It was put in so well. Nicely done! Keep it up. :) Oh! and thanks for your comment, much appreciated.

great poem. truth well spoken awesome job

cute poem :P

Well i dont know what kind of men ur use to but dat aint me

Well i dont know what kind of men ur use to but dat aint me