That wants me to cry

This is so deep and touching! Awesome Cecilia!

I hope he will be alright

So deep and powerful raw emotions well penned

It's a really sad poem, but i thought you wrote it good. I hope he will be alright too :)

This is really sad. hope everything is alright. also you have some slight spelling errors in there. otherwise its great. really emotional. really true. good read!

Simply amazing! Sad but really beautiful :)

Wow amazging...
You penned this perfectly(:

5/5 from mee

It touched me a lot really nice and sensetive one go on

Amazing piece :]

Sad yet beautiful

:] 5/5 keep writing

Aw this is sooooooo sad but its just sooo good. 5/5 :)

The part that included the questions is my favorite. He also I loves your confession saying "With tears I fly to the heavens begging them to protect you by not letting your soul go" revealing that after all you still are weak in front of the beloved. The last line said it all.